Not really sure that I like this one - doesn't seem quite right to me. Something doesn't blend and mix it together properly for me. But it is pretty and like all your stuff amazingly well done, but somehow it just doesn't wow me as much as the others do.

I'm not trying to be mean, just telling ya, babe, don't hate me for it.

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ag, dont worry bout it!
I'm just working some new techniques, not all deviations can be awesome, so i'm glad you didnt tell me it is good when it is obscure at some places...
What do find that is wrong with it?

Critique is always good
(trust when i say this, cos the Lecturers that crit our work for architecture are like gods and the devils, and they make people cry... so I cant be phased by criticism *whispers* I've got superior resistance to critique)



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this is good, and i'm looking forward to seeing this series however i'm not sure about her butterfly wings...they don't seem to fit the beauty of the rest of the picture...hmmm

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I'd like to think so. There are some things I know for certain. Always throw spilled salt over your left shoulder. Keep rosemary by your garden gate. Plant lavender for luck. And fall in love whenever

Wow... this is beautiful! Yay! *falls off chair* No really, I can't wait to see the rest. (of the series, that is) I'm being blonde at the mo... can't you see?

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gorgeous as useual hun cant wait to see the rest ^^

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Cloud Strife in *worldvii ~The Hollow Soldier, The Live Action FFVII Fan Film.

Beautiful work indeed, but the girl doesn't blend as she should.

This is what i think is wrong:

- the contrast and tone of her photo doesn't match the rest: it's a tad too strong ( even the wing colors don't match her tone so they look a tad weird ). She
looks planted there and so do the wings. ( and try to work a little bit better how the grass "covers" her dress it looks a tad akward ).

- the "grass" looks too green and too focused out at back when it should be "disappearing" or "smudging" ( don´t know how to say it properly, well it shouldn't
be that focused is the best i can say ).

-Try to lose a bit of the strong color the castle has cause it makes your eyes wanna "split" ( it causes you to wanna look at the same time to the faerie and to
the castle making you lose the main thing in this picture ( the faerie right? )... try fogging it up a bit, making it "dissappear" but remaining still noticeable.

You asked sammi-antha what was wrong with it and this is what i think is wrong... don't want to overdoit ...

Hope i haven't hurt your feelings... Hope this can help you!

thank you very much!


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The Grass is greener on the other side, 'cos the lady next door ACTUALLY waters her greens. Maybe you should start too!

glad you like it!
I'll be posting more soon!


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The Grass is greener on the other side, 'cos the lady next door ACTUALLY waters her greens. Maybe you should start too!

wow!
thanks for that!
I'll work on it again soon and submit over this one so you can tell me if it looks better!

Thanks for your critique!



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